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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
GASP! That ending was unexpected!! Poor Iris :( They way you described her character was amazing, and it really moved me the way she talked about her sister. It kind of made me sad that I've never been that close to my siblings.

The line that especially got to me was "Iris was supposed to laugh. She was supposed to run. She was supposed to go to Asia and scratch her itch." all the should have's and could have's of life really make me sad; for alot of peoples (like iris)lives seems to end before it really starts ya know?

really wonderful story, you have alot of talent as a writer :D
10/10

Author's Response: Yes, I'm not close to my sibling at all but I hope time will change that. I suppose in a way I poured some of that hope into this story by making Iris such a great big sister.

The mood changed rather abruptly; it was all happy and reminiscent and all of a sudden Iris died. But I'm glad you enjoyed it as well. Thanks for the review!


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