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Review:Wiccan says:
LOL, well...since I left a rave review for the final chapter Dec 2006, I couldn't do it again!

I can do it here though!

I'm not really sure what you refined from the original, although I think the word 'flow' comes to mind.

This is still one of my favorite of all time fics.

Masterful...talented...enchanting...engrossing...superb, etc., etc. etc

Again thank you so much for the entertainment!

Author's Response: So nice to hear from you again, and it's nice just to get a review, they come so rarely now.

Most of the changes were improvements to my writing, especially in the early chapters when I was still rusty from years of not having written creatively. Therefore use of the word "flow" makes me happy, as that indicates that the writing improved as a result of my changes.

I also made several small but significant changes to Harry and Hermione's moments together in the last ten chapters or so. The biggest one is the kiss before Harry leaves for Godric's Hollow. That scene is significantly different from before. You can compare the two if you like as I have never taken the time to repost the new version on fan fiction, so that still has the original version. I'd be interested especially if you would compare those two scenes and let me know your thoughts.

Thanks for reading it again and for taking the time to let me know. G.


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