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Review:propertyoftheHBP says:
Hey there! I came across this looking at someone else's review thread, your summary caught my eye, so I thought I'd give it a go. I'm very glad I did, it was so funny! Very original, and not cliched at all.

I loved Hermione's characterization throughout -- the way she was spazzing out in the beginning, to the simple acceptance in the end was perfectly fitting for her, and it being in her POV was all the more funnier. Just what I'd expect of Hermione.

You definitely got me about halfway through -- I thought little Leo was the 'hot' one after all, and was all disappointed when I thought it wasn't Scorpius. xD

I did see something that stuck out a bit to me: (then again, I'm probably being overly-nitpicky)

"No, it's not them. It's zat other one. Can you imagine him explaining to his parents that his new nickname is 'bug'?"

I like that you made an effort to include Fleur's accent, but shouldn't the 'that' in the third sentence be 'zat', as well? Very minor, and it didn't stop me from loving the story at all, but I figured I might as well point it out. :)

Lovely story!

Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for finding my little piece and leaving a review!

Ahh, consistency. I'll get to that and fix it. Thanks.

I'm glad you liked Hermione. This was really fun to write, especially from her perspective. She seemed the most likely to overreact to something like this, yet rational enough to come to terms with it later.

I'm tickled that you found it funny and not cliched. Hopefully, it lived up to its summary! :)

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