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Review:LindaSnape says:
I've been reading your pieces and I have to say that they're lovely! This one is no exception.

As far as who's who in this piece, well, I'm not entirely certain. In my mind she's the painter. Perhaps, it's simply because I see her as being a woman of strong personality in my mind.

I love how your words seem to flow like poetry from the tip of your computer keys, I would say quill, but that doesn't seem quite apt for a tale that's being read on a computer.

I loved the imagery, the characterization, and the sheer brilliance of your prose! You have great talent.

I would complain about length normally, but I think this is pretty good for something that was whipped up in thirty minutes and it's very enchanting.

“Let me paint you,” you ask without asking.

“If you want to.” I say without saying.
I think those might be my favorite lines in the entire piece.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing and sorry for the late response!

I've actually had more people say that the painter's the girl rather than the boy, so I think a lot of people saw it your way!

Thank you so much! Flow is something I try to work on; imagery I've always considered a weakness.

Those lines that you mentioned came to me very randomly (as did this whole piece). I was (and am still) quite unsure of this piece as a whole, but I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Thanks again for reviewing!

- Celeste


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