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Review:miss_aurora says:
Err, I'm not quite sure of how I feel about this sudden plot advancing. In fact I'm quite surprised at the moment.

They slept, well Tedd and Dom, and yay for that. It's fun to read the condition Teddy found himself when he got up since it was quite...ironic? (And thanks God he actually slept with a girl, not with the said girl's gay friend, else he'll freak out). However, Dom, why did you have to offer a help at times like this? And hell, she should be able to finally find a decent man as a boyfriend, but instead, she kept the eld one?

Oh well, thanks for the wonderful update as usual :D

Author's Response: Yes the plot advances much here, and it is a bit of a surprise from the lazy summer feel, but the next chapters aren't going to be as...crazy as this one. Remember they have some time before France.

Yes, thank Merlin for that. I don't think I can be that cruel to Teddy and I don't think I could write in a sexual identity crisis either aha.

Garland will serve his purpose, every ship needs a anchor, and Garland is Dom's to her party life.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

becca xx

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