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Review:whacked says:
to be honest, that felt a bit rushed. I liked how the plot was moving, and i liked how dom and teddy were like "eh, stuff happens" (you know i can't swear), and i did like garland and dom's relationship. I didn't Like like it, it was just cool how there was an insight into another aspect of dom's life. But at the same time, i just felt that it wasn't flowing very well.

Still, looking forward to chapter 6!

Author's Response: It should feel a bit rushed, what with so much happening as opposed to the previous chapters. The ones before had this airy lazy summer feel while this one still has some of that but tons of plot forward ideas. I do get what you saying completly :) I hate the feeling of a rushed plot.

There's much to Dom (and Teddy) that will still have to find out! I'm glad you liked Dom and Garland. I always picture her attracted to bad boys in bands (I am ahah).

Thanks for reading and reviewing ! :)

becca xx

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