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Review:LindaSnape says:
Aha! This was brilliant. I was laughing at this piece of genius. I really loved it.

It was interesting because you wouldn't expect that Albus would be the betting type. Then again, he is part Weasley. I love the characterization of Scorpius, Albus; and, of course, your original; Isolde. They all seemed to be quite interesting.

I also love the cruel twist of fate that ended up making Scorpius lose the bet and kiss Isolde.

I think the thing that amused me the most, though, was all the students eager to hex one another as hexes kept missing their intended targets. I bet Scorpius will be lucky if he manages to pull out of that affair without a scratch on him.

I don't envy Isolde or Scorpius. I also imagine that somehow Albus isn't going to get out of this unscathed, either. It would be interesting if you wrote a follow up piece to this.

As far as the pacing, plot, and flow went; I thought they all went swimmingly. It's an amusing little one-shot and I quite adored it. Nice job!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much!!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I like to think that Albus has a bit of Fred and George in him.

Yes, I'm a terrible, cruel writer. I had to make Scorp kiss the girl he fancies.

Yeah, the kept missing and hitting people that really, really shouldn't be hexed. He would be luck to make it out unscathed, but I doubt that happened. Isolde would probably make sure he ended up in the Hospital Wing. :)

You know, I've actually began considering writing another chapter for this. I'm curious to find out what happened after. Knowing me, though, I'd probably make them suffer a bit more. :)

Thank you so much for reviewing! You've honestly made my day!! Thank you!

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