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Review:LindaSnape says:
"I was arrogant, never before rejected, and entirely self-confident, as Malfoy’s generally are." To keep up with the past tense I would put 'were' instead of are. There are a few other shift tenses, I think, but other than that you're fine. I didn't catch any spelling or grammatical errors that were glaringly obvious so kudos!

I absolutely adored this. Not a fan of Keith Urban, but I've always liked a good Rose/Scorpius story and this didn't disappoint. I adore that you told it from his perspective as normally it's from her perspective which is all fine and well, but it's nice to see how Scorpius feels for once.

I love how easily she agreed to be his girlfriend. A bit fluffy and cutesy, but that's how it works out sometimes in life, isn't it? I wouldn't know, I'm one of those coy girls. Ha ha.

Anyway, I loved your characterization of both Scorpius and Rose. It was quite cute to see him as pompous and a bit egotistical, but at the same time he wasn't a womanizer or rude to Rose. That was a nice change from the fics that I'm accustomed to.

The flow and pacing seemed well done. I liked your word choice and plot, too.

Over all, a nice and tender tale! But I don't think it was too soppy or romantic, just about right in my opinion. ^_^ Nice work!

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