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Review:Ponytail Goddess says:
Great story! I love how things weren't taken too fast between Lily and Scorpius--truly it was a kid's love story. The characterizations were great and I enjoyed the plot about the necklace's giver. My one criticism would be during the body changing part, as I don't think they'd have agreed to actually doing, being a boy and a girl. I mean, what happens when the call of nature hits? I don't think either would really want to see that much of the other at this age, lol...

I also really enjoyed the plot with Tom's ghost. When you said that the Headmistress looked like she was in a haze (when Scorpius went to tell her what was going on) I thought for sure you were going to have her be possessed too! It's funny how one little word can lead a person on, eh?

Anyways, I'm off to read the sequel. Great work!

-P.G.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments. I have to agree with you concerning the body switching moment. There were certain "aspects" of that scene that I didn't consider at the time. :o) This was my first HP story, and I've considered revising it, but every time I try, I end up writing another story instead. *sigh* I might have another go at it this summer. Once again, thanks for reading and reviewing.

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