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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
This is very, very good! I can see the influence of Gubby's story, but only in the reverse chronology and a couple details (the reference to the seaside, for instance). Otherwise, it's purely original, portraying the relationship in a fresh and interesting way that made this a great pleasure to read.

I really liked the way you connected these scenes with objects like the paper angels and the book - it was done subtly, leaving the focus on the characters and their incredibly awkward moments. I felt uncomfortable for Minerva's sake during these scenes, which goes to show how realistically you wrote her and constructed these scenes.

This is definitely going on my favourites, as it's a fantastic addition to the Tom/Minerva stories on HPFF. ^_^

Author's Response: :o Susan, you made my week with this review. Thank you so much! I got such a shock when I saw your name at the top of my review list.

I was afraid Gubby's influence was going to be too obvious- I had to stop myself from practically ripping ideas from her :P, so to hear that it's not had much influence over it is a huge relief.

The connecting events with objects was not something I originally set out to do, but it fort of appeared as time went on. I'm glad you felt uncomfortable for Minerva, it was how I wanted readers to feel for her.

:o Thank you so much! I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it.


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