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Spangles from the forum here with your review! Sorry it took so long!

Firstly, I want to say I love, love, LOVE your writng style. The way everything flows through it amazing. It sort of has that professional "real book" auror to it. The amount of the dialouge, discription, emotion ratio was perfect, I did not feel overwhelmed by anything and I didn't feel like anything was lacking. I espically loved Hermione motherly emotion towards her friends, it seemed REALLY in character for her to do something like that. I'm also really looking forward to seeing what is diffrent about Ron, because I'm sure if you've mentioned it that it'll be of som eimportance later.

Next, I want to say how EXTREMLY happy I am at your head boy choice. How original! Neville really deserves that title, and I never thought of him getting it. I'm not a fan of Dramiones (but I can see from your listing of ships that later that will come about) in general, but I can usually stand them AS LONG AS Draco is not the head boy, and I'm really happy you chose to stay away from that.

So, all in all, I think this story has the potential to get really big and have like a gazillion reads (if it doesn't already) and you have to potential to write anawesome story. The originality here is amazing, and I'm sure no one else on hpff has a story quite like this, you should be proud. (:

Keep updating! 10/10 ~spangles

Author's Response: Ahh! Thank you so much for the fantastic review! You made me happy, thank you!!

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