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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Oh, my. I have chills. Really.

This was awesome. Beautiful. I love how the title ties in, and (at least to me) seems a bit morbid; the whole 'laugh your heart out', and then the sister dies. -shudder-

I like how you made her Poppy. (: I kind of suspected, early in the story, but by the end, I had forgotten. Good job on that. (:

I especially loved this line:
“Mum,” I sobbed, a handful of drooping daisies clutched in my hand, “When is Iris coming home? I picked these for her.”

It just seemed so... sad, so haunting.

(And for the record, I totally thought her name was "Isis" until I c&ped that... Wow, I feel dumb.)

Seriously, this was an awesome one-shot. (: Favoriting!
-Jasmine

Author's Response: Yes, this may be my first actually clever title. For some reason I enjoy writing stories where I don't come straight out and say who the character is, I'm not sure why. All I know is that when I read a story, I like for the author to leave some things to my imagination. Usually it's not the character, and this time I did have people call Poppy by her name, but I still like the mystery of it. Thanks for the enthusiastic review!

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