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Review:lovelyinsane says:
I'm here with your long awaited review! So sorry it's been taking forever.

I thought this was the most touching story, ever. I've never read Draco/Pansy, and I think you've done this brilliantly. I loved the dialouge and the emotion that you gave Draco. It's a different side that I saw of him, a side that I knew existed within the core of his skin. He loved Pansy, and I practically cried when I read the pain in his heart.

I think horror and dark would work well with this. Just the mention of the blood that she couged up makes it dark. I think that drama works as well with this. And the romance. There's a lot of romantic tension between the two, but I think you have it just right. I enjoyed reading this! Good luck with your editing, and I hope I helped with what you wanted

10.10 :D
~lovelyinsane aka torrentaldownpour

Author's Response: Hi Torrential! No worries about the time. Sorry it took me four days to respond.

Thank you for the pleasant review! Yeah, I tried to make the whole thing as realistic as possible. Draco really became an emotional person near the end, I think. Ridiculously complex, but not really shown.

I'm glad you did like it, though.

And you're right. I had never really thought of it being a Horror/Dark before. And it's not. It's Dark! I wish they weren't together. I'll tag it that anyways though. Yeah the blood . . . oi.

Thanks for the 10! Makes my day! You definitely did help me out. Editing's gone swimmingly, I just wanted to finish it up before I replied, I guess. (that's my story, anyway)

Thanks again (that's a three-part thank-you), Jackson

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