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Review:Elysium says:
Wow, Ayesha. That was intense. I loved the way you used short, crisp sentences to punctuate the flow of your writing (i.e. But the pain is real. Itís always real.). That combined with the repetition of the thumping sound makes a really heady rhythm to your story, which is something I always love in a one-shot. It was kind of eerie being inside Hermione's head whilst she was in that frame of mind. She's always been the voice of reason so the fraughtness came through loud and clear. And it was a great hook at the end.

I knew your diction and turn of phrase were really lovely, just based off what you showed me from the story you're working on but I was pretty excited to see what kind of writer you are in general. I love reading aloud and hearing the way a sentence rolls into the next... your story made that a lovely experience. You're a talented girl, all around :P

xox Kylie

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