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Review:karinapotter says:
Gosh, I haven't read this for a LONG time and I still love it! (:

AMALIA IS SO BRILLIANT! She's so bad and good and dangerous and mysterious, the type of girl that Roger Davies really should get with, because they're just so in sync! I love how this smart, mouse-like, shy, closed off girl has unwound our playboy. Roger is so confidant and accepting of his way of life while Amalia is so unsure about it. Good for Davies, finding a girl that makes him so alive!
Write s'more about some other kind of player, like Sirius (yummy.) or shy but wild soul like Remus (yummier!) or a mixture of the two in a hot passionate god-man :D

You have a freak flag. Wave it.
All quiet girls have that, it's very intriguing(x

I am Roger Davies. And I make good girls go bad.
I love this line, it ties the story up so WELL!

Superb Job again, I would favorite it, but I already have (x

Author's Response: I'm glad you still love it! As a result, I still love you, I found out ;] thank you for all you're wonderful words. I'm so glad you liked Amalia. She's a very original character and I think that I created her unlike any others in my one-shots :]

Those are good ideas! I haven't written any other marauder/oc fics except The Perfect Scene, Disturbia, and Love & Broomticks. But I'll def take that into consideration!


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