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Review:randomishness says:
OMG!! I'm SOO confused!! When did the first kiss happen, you know the one in the first chapter? Ya, that one. When did/does that happen? Has it even happened yet? I'm SOOO confused!!! Please respond, oh ya and other than that it's AMAZING!

Author's Response: Okay. The structuring in this story is pretty weird, I need to go through and edit it. Sorry.

The kiss in Chapter 1 actually happens after Chapter 14 (their argument), at the beginning of Chapter 15. Lily hears the Slytherin plan to ambush James, and follows him, leading to the scene you read about in Chapter 1. Their first kiss actually happens in Chapter 8, at Sirius' party.

It's confusing, I know! Hope that helps though. Thank you for reviewing. :)

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