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Review:mizzxpearl says:
Woah. I TOTALLY messed up last night when I left you your review. It was late, and I don't know what I was thinking. :( When I came to check if you left a response or not today and reread my review, it made me hang my head in shame. :(

I said that you should write :

"Sorry, I had a really late night," I say laughing, adding a wink at the end, which earned us both a dirty look from Mitch

That's so wrong. I switched from present tense to past! I would have reviewed that chapter again, but I didn't want it to be considered spamming, so I just did this one. :/ Anyway, it SHOULD be

"Sorry, I had a really late night," I say laughing and winking, earning us a dirty look from Mitch.

You don't have to have 'both' either, since you already have 'us' and it makes it repititive, and the sentence is already wordy as it is.

Sorry about that!! I always have trouble writing something in present tense, it just always sounds a little off to me. :/ Anyway, rerequest and I'll read this chapter and the next one! :D

Author's Response: That's fine! We all make mistakes. haha I thought it sounded a little off, but I'm not good with grammar so I wasn't gonna doubt you! Thanks very much for clearing that up for me, I'll be sure to rerequest (:

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