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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:
Interesting ideas played out here in this chapter. I like how you introduced the charators and positions, but you just kinda.. listed them. I think it looks a lot better to just weave in the characteristics. And another thing, I think there should be other houses on the team since its Hogwarts Dragons.. But thats just opinion. But still, good job. I really do like the idea you have going here and really can't wait to see what you do with it. :D

Author's Response: Thank you, yes I agree this chapter needs some editing so it's not so obvious I'm just introducing all the characters. I wanted the team members houses to be completly random and with randomness you don't necessarily get even numbers, so it turned out there were no Hufflepuffs or Ravenclaws but I'm cool with that. In this story the team will be completly united it's only Rose and Scorp who will be competitive but I like to think by this stage the next generation is well and truly over Gryffindor vs Slytherin or pure blood vs mudblood so none of that will be mentioned. Thank you for your lovely reviews!

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