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Review:doratonks14 says:
Oh my goodness!

This was amazing! Great job with your challenge, you did this perfectly! Lily was hysterical, going on about being the greatest Quidditch player ever and about how big of a git he was. Honestly, if I hadn't given you the challenge and known that you didn't do humor often, I wouldn't have known it. This was truly awesome.

The only thing is, when you tried to italicize, you still have the coding around the words. I think you're supposed to use the brackets like this [] to italicize. But I might be wrong so don't quote me on that. That's just me being picky though. It didn't detract from the story, I just thought you might want to know cause it looked a little weird.

Honestly, this was brilliant. After reading your A/N, I'm so excited that you're going to write a short story after this as well, because this was really really good. I'll be sure to check back later for it.

Congrats on rocking this challenge! I hope you had fun with it. :D 10/10 Thank you so so much for participating.

Author's Response: Gosh, thank you! I loved writing Lily, she was so awful but so much fun. Eleven-year-olds are pretty much the best things to write ever, I think.

I've fixed the coding issue - I had the right codes, but I didn't use the simple editor. I got excited about the 1 hour queue and all that...

My problem is that I have never been able to write a second chapter of a WIP - so... I'm really not sure how that will unfold. If ever.

Thank you so much for the amazing review, hun, and I'm absolutely chuffed.

- emma xx

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