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Review:harrylilyjames says:
Umm...I would of liked to see a bit more reaction when he came upon the dead James, it felt like 'ok, he's dead' and he moved him aside. You could have him scream in anguish or yell his head off. Also, why did he put Harry back into the cot? and leave him in the same room as his dead mother? That's a bit odd.
But I liked the interpretation of the Angels crying when it's raining, that was a really nice touch.

Author's Response: I think it was because Sirius knew what to expect, and that he is a person who doesn't like to really show his emotions. Also I think that he knew the someone would be there in a few moments, ie Dumbledore and that he couldn't keep his hard outer exterior on for much longer and that also he wasn't thinking strait either. I don't know i just wrote it on an off hand chance that it might be good

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