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Review:VampireKisses says:
Hey, emmapotter. Kristen here! I'm on my Itouch safari, so you must forgive me if my review is a little bit shorter - new at typing and all :).

It's a sad Ron/Hermione :(

Your descriptions were nice, I especially liked the fourth paragraph. It was a nice little montage of all the innocent Ron/Hermione moments us shippers always liked to read over and over again. However, I would have liked to see more elaboration on some stuff, like what was Ron's job? Was he working in Sports? How was he distant from her? How would she get the suspicion he was cheating on her in the first place?

I liked how this showed Hermione's personality. You can tell she's a stubborn person, and not very open minded xD And it was all done subtlety, too. I mean, we the readers of "Harry Potter" know Ron to have good intentions, but he can be a fool. But he's Hermione's fool! Although why would Hermione be the one to be upset at Ron's working tendencies? I'd think the workaholic gene would be in Hermione, but that's just me :)

I liked how you had "knight in not so shiny armor," it was cute ^_^.


Author's Response: Yeah, this song-fic is sort of an out-take of my other story, Journey of A Lifetime, but no excuses, I should have mentioned Ron's job. it adds to the description which you must've noticed, I suck at. XD
So anyway, you reviewed so fast! And glad you liked! I think Hermione didn't appreciate Ron's workaholic tendencies because she was too scared something might happen to him, since he's an Auror..Again, my bad. It's a loop hole in the plot! Thanks for pointing it out!:)

I don't know where 'Knight in not so shiny armour' came from, but it just did! :P
Ron is really a fool! I think we all agree, he is daft and completely thick! :D
And Ron isn't cheating on her! He's just ignoring her too much!
Anyway, I hope this cleared up most of the stuff! :)
Thanks for stopping by,
Aakanksha :)

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