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Review:ladymblack says:
You've certainly drawn me in! I know that I will continue reading. It's well written, at least in terms of terminology and verbiage. I would ask that you work a little harder on your homophones like "there" and "your" and you tend to forget that an apostrophe needs to be used for were...it should be "we're."

I read up until this point, expecting some of these things to be adjusted, but sometimes that takes more time than is available.

Otherwise, I really enjoy your characterization and hope to see some more of it.

Two points on this particular chapter, which prompted me to review post-haste:

Gornuk was killed along with Ted and Dirk. It was Griphook and Dean that escaped. I could be completely off the mark and you will explain how he is still alive in a future chapter, but I couldn't help but to point it out.

Also, Ginny has obviously been inside Gringott's with her parents; we even see it in CoS.

Keep working, it's all worth it in the end. I'm clicking on "next" in a few moments...

Author's Response: Thanks, however I've looked through my story countless times for mistakes, and use the word were (as in there were) a lot which is a completely different word to using we're for 'we are.' Not only that but you do not explain what you think I am doing wrong with regard to homophones like "there" and "your."

I thank you for your other points, I have since looked them both up and have changed them both.

Keep reading

Kiagh88


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