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Review:butterbeergal says:
That was bloody hilarious! Hahaha! Let me just say that I'm in the office right now so I look rather silly smiling by myself. More than once, I had to cover my mouth to keep from snorting. That was fantastic! My kind of humor.

Ron felt as if he were about to pass out. He desperately wanted to join the pygmy puff exodus.

My favorite line - really cracked me up. Stroke of genius those pygmy puffs. Their fluffiness is a stark contrast to our well-decorated and supposedly oh-so-respectable Head and Assistant Head Aurors.

I really like how you characterized Harry and Ron here, and I can actually imagine this happening to them. After everything they went through, I'm glad their sense of humour is still intact. I especially love their exchanges because it really sounds like Harry and Ron. The girls are lovely! Glad to see they're still feisty - and I reckon that's the only way to straighten up those two. And Molly Weasly to the rescue was brilliant! Trust her to come up with a sure fire albeit mortifying way to get the girls back.

Umbridge?? Hahaha! Unexpected twist there, but one which cracked me up all the more. She really has lost her mind.

Great job! One of the funniest pieces of work I've read on HPFF so far. Now I have to go read your other stories.

Author's Response: Ok, that was an AWESOME review.

I'm really glad this got you laughing. I really got a kick out of writing this off-kilter story.

This was the first time I wrote Harry and Ron together, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. My first story, "Stop all the Clocks" focused on Ron and Hermione so I didn't get the chance to do anything with H/R. I figured that, after all they'd been thru, by this time in their lives they would've needed a more carefree life. And the girls...lets just say I didn't think they appreciate R/H's second childhood. LOL.

Molly is my hero. I just couldn't resist having her ride to the rescue, after giving them an exasperated scolding (and a feeding).

Umbridge. I absolulety DESPISE Umbridge. I never thought she really got what was coming to her in canon, so I've been looking for a way to have her meet justice. I still don't think she got it bad enough even in this story, but it's the best I could come up with.

Thanks again for the great review!

TEW

P.S. I'd love to have you look at my other stuff, but, no pressure ;)

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