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Review:kandekisses says:
Wow, I feel a little hot and bothered right now lol.

That was really passionate.
&A surprise. As I was reading I kept guessing who they were. When I found out it was Sirius, I have to admit I didn't think it was him at first. &After that I realized that there were about 3 choices the other person would be. One of which I really really didn't want to picture lol.

But it was still a surprise when Sirius said his name. Sirius and Lupin? Wow. You know the part that made me chuckle was about the kiss. I soo agree, I don't like it when people kiss just anybody. Its a intimate thing lol.

I think you wrote this perfectly, really its hard to write a slash like this. &You gave just enough detail. You've got skill! But of course I already knew this. Your stories are so darn original &so surprising. I love reading them!

Make sure to stop by my thread for any other story you have I would love to read them =)

Excellent Job!

Author's Response: Hot and bothered? To be honest, all slash stories make me feel that way! :PPP

I wanted to keep an air of mystery up about Sirius for just a bit, just to keep the ball rolling, as it were.

Sirius and Lupin, yes. That about kissing, straight from the heart, that is. I feel that intimate things of that nature shouldn't be flaunted about here and there.

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback, that's why I'm always on your review thread. Please, feel free to say no if you don't want to read anything of mine! But I do hope this was a decent slash, as it was my first. Once again, thank you! :]]]

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