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Review:Margravine says:
Zinny (it is Zinny, is it not?) I've heard lovely things about you around TGS but haven't had the chance to stalk your stories until now, but I am so glad I have. This is, I am afraid just a line, but reviews are all love, yes?

Engaging as the first chapter was, it was this one which really won me over, it was refreshingly different from standard Dom and Vic stories. You give a tantalizing amount of information, the contrast between POVS is inspired and your writing is beautiful and verging on lyrical. I look forward to seeing what you do with this!

Author's Response: Yep, I'm Zinny! :) Lovely to meet you Jo -- I'll have to drop you a line on TGS! And I can't thank you enough for reviewing, I smile like an idiot whenever I see that I have one. xD

Really?! xD Oh my goodness I'm actually really glad to hear you say so -- the second chapter captivating you, that is -- because I've always sort of been fond of the first. But Victoire has started to grow on me I suppose, and so I'm glad I did her some justice!

*squee* I'm so glad you like the alternating POVS; it was one of my favorite things to do, really. I always figured that with Dom & Vic stories you really only get one sister's side of the story, and I wanted to encompass both in this. I wish I could say more or even address your lovely comments on my writing, but I'm far too busy smiling like an idiot and being flabbergasted over this review. XD

Thank you again - so much - for leaving such a wonderful review!!


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