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Review:Grapeback says:
Wow. I regret ever saying anything bad about Lyla. It is as if a new, graceful girl has finally grown out of a older, more perfect one. I have to say this aloud- You are bloody brilliant and I love your writing style. I will go into more detail, yes?

Okay. Lyra. Towards the beginning, I lol'ed when she had to correct Professor McGonagall about what she had turned Malfoy into. I could envision that moment in my mind perfectly, and when she was mentioning how much she wished she could play Quidditch, I truly felt sorry for her. There is nothing as terrible as doing something you aren't capable of doing :( After this, it got worse (conflict that is; the story actually got better :)) Sirius and her were joking, but silence blew over them like a draft, and it was then when I truly realised how close they really were.

Your story isn't like any other. Your female OC is strong-willed and filled with flaws, although they aren't so evident at first (which was my problémo. Sorry for doubting you!), they resurface in the end. I had the feeling that Lyra was seeking revenge for her parents' death, and altogether frustrated with a society that fostered their killers. Having the government at the root of it was the icing on the cake- let's face it, no government is perfect, and when it comes down to the Ministry, they will want to keep it as quiet as possible. So thank you.

Besides this, I can feel a growing attraction between Lyra and Sirius, although it could be the close bond they have), and a lightness in the air with James and Lily, which can only be a good thing. I fear that as the romance grows, so will the rebellious side of Lyra Capullet.

Sorry if I sounded like a movie description! This is continuing to be a very good read ;)

Author's Response: First of all...Oh My God Thankyou so much, youve literally blown me away with this review.

I'm really glad that I managed to evoke sympathy from you towards Lyla that's just what I was aiming for.
And you're right Lyla's rebelious side will definatly show its face in the none to distant future. She and Sirius are extremely close but i'm not saying any more than that.

I feel like i should leave a really long reply considering the amazing review you just left me but all I have left to say is THANK YOU once again. I cannot wait to hear what you have to say about the rest of the story.

Liz.


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