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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:

I've always been extremely envious of your descriptive abilities - you are quite possibly one of the most talented descriptors I've ever encountered on HPFF or in the realm of fanfiction, if I'm being entirely honest.

Anyway, moving on!

I'm going to start with the very last thing: the not-so-happy ending. I ADORED it. I thought this was going to follow in the vein of a lot of other Teddy/Rose, but it didn't and I think that's why I love it so so so so much.

I think you've hit Rose's characterisation right on; she knows what she's wants to do/is about to do is wrong, but does it anyway if only to fulfill her selfish desires, and I love the flaw. It's very fitting not only for this piece, but for Rose herself. Perhaps it's because I've always imagined her as the selfish brat of an older sister, but whatever :P

My favourite line would have to be this one:
He hates her because she does not love him, because she enticed him into her tangle of lies.

All I can say is W-O-W. Talk about beautifully written.

GAH! I'm so envious of this - of all your pieces, really - that I can hardly talk, lol.

Great job, Marina, my dear! It was fantastic!


Author's Response: omg Molly McG!! You're talking nonsense, but it is lovely nonsense! *hugs* I dont know what to say, I'm overwhelmed and so flattered - you're so talented yoursellf, you know :P Just... THANK YOU. I never wanted it to be a happy ending because I hate them. So boring, bring on the angst :D xxx

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