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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hello, I'm here with your review from the forums!

Aw, that was so sad :( I think this was a nice plot and I like the way you played it out! It was very nice seeing this kind of really perfect yet unrealistic dream Ginny had, as compared to reality.

The writing was a little choppy and the dialogue was stiff at times. I think those are both things that you need to work on, but it's also something that develops as you write more. There are also tutorials on the forums if you want to check those out!

Other that that I thought this was good! It was well plotted out and an enjoyable read! I like how you showed how everyone was, and how life goes on even though Ginny didn't think it would.

Author's Response: Aww thank you =] This was my first ever one-shot. So naturally it would have the most of my mistakes. Or maybe it's just talent. I can't be a perfect writer. But anyways, I'll keep what you said in mind =] And I'm glad you liked it =] Thanks for reviewing

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