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Review:mizzxpearl says:
Yayy! Since I'm snowed in my house, my requests are being taken of in no time. :) So, here I am to grant you your review!

First, let me just tell you the one think I noticed. You have the story switch tenses from third to first person, so you should go back and edit it. Also, it was a little confusing when you went from in the office to lunch with Ginny. If you switch scenes like that, you might want to put this in the middle--> **.

So it'll be like this:

"Thanks Penelope." Lunch with Ginny. Well that was one good thing about this God awful Monday.

*

"What's the matter Hermione? Your looking a little pale..." Ginny said trailing off.

That way it's a little less confusing. :) Other than that, the story is nice and different. The story needs to take a little getting used to, but besides than that, I think it has a lot of potential. :)

Great job, keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review and point out and quote the scene where it happened. You have no idea how crazy it is when someone points out a mistake and doesn't show where it was at.:/
I love your suggestion, and will put that into my edited version!
Thank you again for reviewing! :D


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