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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hi, I'm here with your review from the forums! I'm sososo sorry about leaving this review for so long! I'm not even going to bother with excuses.

I really think what you've done with this chapter is fantastic. I'm actually really anti-crazy AU stories like this, but I'm finding this story so intriguing. It's very well written and I can tell that you've plotted out the story very carefully and thought everything through.

I really like how you've approached this idea of "other Aurors." I'm assuming they're from another country that has a different accent like the US or Ireland or something, since you mentioned them D having a fake British accent. The way you've approached that idea is very unique. You've avoided this clichè of the American exchange student coming to Hogwarts and really twisted International Relations into something new!

Another thing I like is how you're incorporating all these canon ideas from the books into your story. It's very difficult to mix other people's ideas into a story that you're trying to branch off from, but you're doing it so well.

Your attention to detail is wonderful, and I really understand the whole plot easily. One of the things that I like about your writing style is your ability to write something serious or informational, but give it a witty twist. There were a couple of times that I LOLed when nothing particularly funny actually happened!

Great job!

Author's Response: And I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. But to the meat of the response, eh?

I'm not sure I even like reading crazy AU stories either, but I'm very glad that you enjoyed this so far.

I though it might be interesting to see how Americans would handle this whole Auror thing. I mean, they had to have Aurors and I always wondered why they didn't send some kind of help. Glad to do my part against the exchange student (although I was once very guilty of that one).

I really wanted some kind of grounding in the books - without it, I'd not truly be writing fanfiction. The truth is, this story grew up out of a desire to see how well I could weave these threads together.

I'm glad you found it unexpectedly amusing. It's something I strive for in a character like K. She's definitely a little snarky in her thoughts.

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your time.


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