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Review:Grapeback says:
hi! Your banner and summary attracted me...so here I am!

First off, I want to compliment your banner. Although you didn't make it, it was completely awesome and I gasped. Compliments to who made it!

Now on to the story. A lot of people don't write Dumbledore in first person, so it surprised me when you did. You did justice to his character of course, but I found it hard to get in his head. It might be because he is Dumbledore and I will never ever understand his complexity :p

I thought that the first half of the story was simply reviewing everything that happened in HBP...and it bored me a little. But the other half was absolutely amazing. I teared up when Ariana was there with Albus, and he obvious felt a lot of regret. You portrayed this perfectly, and I think it added to the emotion with Ariana forgave him. Strictly speaking, it wasn't all his fault. Like 25% his fault :)

You have a gift for writing Dumbledore! Because of this, I absolutely admire you and am forever your slave. What shall I read next?

Great job!

Amber

Author's Response: Hello there! I always appreciate seeing new readers to my works.

Ha ha, thank you. She's from PC and I really don't know her actual name, but she's pretty amazing.

Heh, I know. It kind-of took me by surprise when the idea hit me to write it from his POV, but I was inspired so I decided to go with it. Why thank you, I'm glad that you felt that I did him justice. Ha ha, aww. I'm sorry, lovely.

I'm sorry that the beginning bored you, but I felt as if it should begin there. All the same, thanks for that input. I'm really glad you found the other half to be so amazing, though. I really do appreciate that. I was hoping that I would portray Ariana accurately.

Thanks, lovely. It's nice to know that I'm admired.

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