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Review:RocketBabyDoll9 says:
Hey there. Rocket again, with your review. Not logged in at the moment, but you recognize my name, I'm sure, so it doesn't matter. (: Sorry I took such a long time to get to this. I'm still sick unfortunately, and have been frighteningly busy. Now, on with the review!

Another really well written, intriguing chapter! I loved the interactions K&D had with all the order members. Your characterization was spot on, but what was particularly nice that you did was when you made Tonks avoid the troll leg umbrella stand. I really liked that you included that in there.

I like K&D a lot so far. I also like this plot a lot. Though it's AU, it's realistic. Who says that American wizards couldn't help in the wizarding war? So I really do like that idea, a lot.

I liked the 'test' you put the two of them through. Though we, as readers, pretty much know K&D are trustworthy, the Order members don't know that, so I liked the inclusion of the test.

I like how serious K is. And the little interactions between her and D are too cute!

Feel free to re-request when you have the third chapter up. The thread's full, but it's my goal to clear it up tonight, so hopefully it will stay that way!

Cheers,
Rocket.

Author's Response: I do recognize you! Thanks for dropping in again and sorry it took me so long to respond. I really have no excuse.

I thought the umbrella stand might be a nice addition. I figured if I remember it happening fairly well, then most readers would. This is, after all, a Tonks who's had some practice sneaking through that entryway. But she's still Tonks (and a little clumsy).

Yay! I thought people might hate on the concept of Americans helping the war effort, but since Voldemort presumably wants to take over the whole world and America is in the world, I felt like I could get away with it.

I thought it would be silly for the Order to absolutely trust them right off. They still probably won't fully for a little while. I know I wouldn't if I were an Order member.

K&D are pretty cute. They make a really good partnership. I'll definitely look into that. But, first I have to get that chapter up soon!

Thanks again - I really enjoy reading your feedback!


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