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Review:RocketBabyDoll9 says:
Hey there. Rocket again, with your review. Not logged in at the moment, but you recognize my name, I'm sure, so it doesn't matter. (: Sorry I took such a long time to get to this. I'm still sick unfortunately, and have been frighteningly busy. Now, on with the review!

Another really well written, intriguing chapter! I loved the interactions K&D had with all the order members. Your characterization was spot on, but what was particularly nice that you did was when you made Tonks avoid the troll leg umbrella stand. I really liked that you included that in there.

I like K&D a lot so far. I also like this plot a lot. Though it's AU, it's realistic. Who says that American wizards couldn't help in the wizarding war? So I really do like that idea, a lot.

I liked the 'test' you put the two of them through. Though we, as readers, pretty much know K&D are trustworthy, the Order members don't know that, so I liked the inclusion of the test.

I like how serious K is. And the little interactions between her and D are too cute!

Feel free to re-request when you have the third chapter up. The thread's full, but it's my goal to clear it up tonight, so hopefully it will stay that way!


Author's Response: I do recognize you! Thanks for dropping in again and sorry it took me so long to respond. I really have no excuse.

I thought the umbrella stand might be a nice addition. I figured if I remember it happening fairly well, then most readers would. This is, after all, a Tonks who's had some practice sneaking through that entryway. But she's still Tonks (and a little clumsy).

Yay! I thought people might hate on the concept of Americans helping the war effort, but since Voldemort presumably wants to take over the whole world and America is in the world, I felt like I could get away with it.

I thought it would be silly for the Order to absolutely trust them right off. They still probably won't fully for a little while. I know I wouldn't if I were an Order member.

K&D are pretty cute. They make a really good partnership. I'll definitely look into that. But, first I have to get that chapter up soon!

Thanks again - I really enjoy reading your feedback!

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