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Review:Grapeback says:
Hi again (sorry you can't shake me off)

I don't think I mentioned it in the previous chapter, but kudos on Lyla's last name. I like the Shakespearean you put in it :)

You know, I always wondered what it felt like to be blind your whole life, so I'm really glad that you decided to give your character a situation like that. I wonder if she will be able to see again some time during the story? Hmmm.

The Sorting was typical. I'm really sorry for sounding awful, but you need to shake it up a bit. I'm sure that once you are done with introductions, you will, but just in case *hmm hm*

Since I felt like I went through it all before (in countless other fics), I really don't know what to say. I knew that she would be in Gryffindor, but can't wait to see what happens between the Marauders, Lily and friends, and Lyla. Hmm. For some reason, I foresee romance :p

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hellooo,
yeh i agree with you this chapter was completely predictable but it had to be done and and now we can move on with the rest of the tale.


Thank you for reviewing once again.

Liz.


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