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Review:Grapeback says:
Hi! I read your summary and absolutely adored it. And when I read the first chapter itself I wasn't disappointed.

So...a (big) part of me wonders if this is a possibl Rose/ Lysander romance. I've never read one but I like the sound of it! If this does happen to be it, I can't wait to read more, and even if it isn't, I'll keep on reading! You have an amazing writing style, and I adore your use of dialogue and description.

The only thing I really had a problem with was the beginning. It was kind of...hard to place. You set up the scene write, but you could have used more description. I had no idea where they were until it mentioned 'Scorpius and Hugo flying above their heads'. It's not really necessary for you to do so...it just might make it flow better.

Hugo and Scorpius are friends? This just proves that you are a revolutionary. I've NEVER seen them portrayed as friends. EVER. Keep up with these absolutely-amazing-yet-still-canon ideas. They make me smile :)

Haha, I think my favourite part of the story was your portrayal of Teddy. He was kind of gay-ish, but in the good way...if you know what I mean? He striked my as such anyways ;)

Absolutely amazing start to a great story. You've got yourself a dedicated reviewer!

Author's Response: Oh, I see what you mean. And I'm glad you liked the summary - I'm not one for writing them, so it's a relief to read that it caught your attention :)

I never thought of putting a spin on the story like that, a Rose/Lysander romance I mean. That does seem like a fun ship to write here, but I'm afraid that wasn't the direction I was taking. Maybe I could have him shift his interests to her for a moment of conflict in the long run, though.. hm.. plot bunnies are attacking me as I type (;

I'd never thought of Hugo and Scorpius being friends as that unheard of until so many people pointed out how much they liked it! Aha, well, I guess that shows how friendship can conquer even the biggest age differences :) I also made them friends so that I could give Scorp a connection to the Weasley-Potter clan, and therefore Rose.

But anyways, thanks for reviewing! The next chapter is in progress :)

Best,
Nadhira


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