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Review:Yoshi_Kitten says:
Hello Melissa! I am finally here to give you your second prize review, lol!! AWW, poor Neville! Once I realized that it was his mum he was grieving over in the beginning, I almost cried! The way you were describing his emotions was very good, and I just felt so bad for him, the poor guy. Neville really has been through a lot of crap and his story is just so tragic. :'(

And you're absolutely right, there really are far too few Neville/Hannah stories out there. Come to think of it, I think this might be the very first one that I have ever actually read myself, lol! It was very touching and very, very sweet. I loved the connection the two of them seemed to share here. I also thought that the ending here was simply perfect! The dialogue between the two of them, and then surprise pregnancy part, it really made everything come together full circle in my opinion... One life ends, another life begins.

Overall, this was a very nice one-shot dear. I am so happy you requested this one because I just loved it SO much, lol!! :)
10/10

Author's Response: Helo Lovely!!! I've been reading all of your reviews but haven't had the time to properly respond to any of them. :( They are wonderful reviews and I appreciate every one of them. :) I will get around to responding asap.

I'm sooo happy that you enjoyed this little one-shot. Neville has always held a soft spot in my heart. He is an amazing character. I hadn't intended this to be a Neville/Hannah fic at the start, but it sorta just worked out that way. :) I'm glad it worked out. Hannah's pregnancy surprised me too. lol.

Thanks for the review! I promise that I'll get to the others soon.
-Melissa

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