Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:RocketBabyDoll9 says:
Hey there! Rocket here, with your review you requested!

Oh. My. Gosh. This was brilliant. I don't typically read angsty/darkish fics like this. So I'm glad you requested it. I thought it was really well written.

I really enjoyed the flash-backs. We don't see enough of the Black brothers' relationship, at least, not portrayed in a realistic way. They always hate each other all the time, or begin hating each other suddenly, so the way you had them 'close' to one another when they were younger was of course, believable. I have two older brothers, close in age the way Sirius and Regulus were, and they were definitely closer when they were younger, and as they've gotten older, they have certainly drifted apart.

I also really liked Regulus's sorting. To eventually have any kind of redemption, he had to have not always been a smug type Slytherin. He obviously showed some believable strength and weakness in contrast, as a character.

This, being your last line, was of course, genius. It was emphatic, and fitting for everything the passage was about.

'I, Regulus Arcturus Black, had finally shown what I was really worth.'

As I said, genius.

Anyway, even though this was only a one-shot, feel free to re-request anything else you've written! This was glorious, really.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) You have no idea how wonderful it is to receive reviews like this! Thank you!!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 551
Submit Report: