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Review:Sleeping Paige says:
Okay, this one's gping to brief rather brief. I've noticed you've got quite a lot of reviews. The spacing just about made me stop reading. I know it seems like a minor detail, but it's really not. As a general rule, If you're using MS Word, don't indent your dialog paragraphs. I understand this is a whiny point, but it makes a difference for those with eye problems.

Now, onto the actual story. Regulus seems like an interesting spin. The flashed memories before death (what an angonising death) seems perfectly logical. I think, by human nature, we all panic with death.

Regulus Worth: This is the point that I diagree, but you can take your views. Sirius's parents loved Regulus because he followed their set 'plan'. Although they stood silent, whispering in the background, he stood up and actulaly did something under the pressure. Yes, he walked to his death, but thats hows something honourable of his character. (I'll stop myself from takihng this to another level ...), but Walburga (what a name!) loved him. Sirius, if he lived to hear Kreacher's confession, probably would have felt sympathy.

I think it was more self-realisation ...

Sorry, this sounds like an analysis.

-sleeping paige

Author's Response: Thanks for your time. I've spent a lot of time trying to fix the spacing and honestly, I'm sick of dealing with it. Yeah, this doesn't sound like a review at all. But thanks anyways for your time.

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