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Review:Alopex says:
Since you did vaguely mention characterization and description, I suppose I ought to make a token remark about them. Thumbs up. I liked them both.

I found myself very drawn into this story. Typically, I skim at least 75% of fanfiction I read, and I tend to read carefully only for my favorite authors on my own time. Review requests get a little less effort most of the time. I found myself completely engaged in this story, though. From the beginning, I was hooked. You leave things just vague enough that the reader has to pay attention to properly understand, but I didn't find myself confused by a convoluted plotline.

Sure, there are quite a few things I still have questions about, but that's normal at the beginning of a story. There would be no point in reading anything beyond the first chapter if the author revealed all at the very beginning. I am very curious about this Organization and what role the other teams are going to play in this story, and I have quite a few other little questions like that floating around. At the risk of sounding repetitive, I found this story extremely interesting.

K and D are fascinating characters. I don't recall ever reading anything fanfic or otherwise with such super-duper spy elements (I don't normally go for spy stories, but maybe I should reconsider), though I seem to remember reading about a TV show with possibly a similar element in regards to the mind-wiping.

Anyhow, I loved all the little codes that were slipped in, and thank you so much for translating them for the readers! I never would have understood otherwise.

If you'd like, please re-request once you have more posted. I would like to read more of this story.

Author's Response: Yay, token remarks! I do that in my request thread too.

Good - I've been working so hard to walk that line between being vague/interesting and confusing everyone. I was concerned that with the amount of exposition I have to slip in there, I might lose people.

Well, I'm not authorized to reveal anything about the Organization. They wouldn't like that. But I'm glad you have questions. Questions are very good.

I knew Dollhouse would come up eventually. When I began writing this fiction in 2008, I'd never heard of it. Now that I have looked into it, I know there are important differences in the techniques and reasons for altering memories. Readers just don't know about them yet.

I thought as much. Codes are tricky business. I'm sure K and D wouldn't understand them either out of context.

Thank you so much for the lovely review. I shall definitely re-request.

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