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Review:hpfan45 says:
Seriously great chapter. I love how describe the background just enough that we can picture it and just as little so it doesn't ruin the flow of the conversation. I like Dom, she seems sweet, but just wants to enjoy life without drama for once and gets the opposite.

I am a little iffy about Vic, but it seems like she really is sad for leaving Teddy, and I would expect Ted to be more nervous when he was telling his fiance's sister that he was in love with her!

So i am guessing the story takes place mostly in paris (title) ? Can't wait to see how things turn out!

update soon (:

becca xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I tried hard to deviate from one overused version of Victoire that is spoiled, selfish, drop dead gorgeous, gets guys easily, and all in all a bad guy. I don't think I did too well on that, but for the purpose of the story she had to be annoying. I didn't want the reader to hate her though, just try and understand her thinking. Glad you were just "iffy" about her; that's all I was expecting. :)

Sorry to break it to you, but this is a one shot! The story is over. But I purposely left it slightly open-ended so that I can continue Dom, Ted and Victoire's story some other time. It was fun to write, and I'd love to get to know Dom better through a novel one day. It's just that I'm so bad at continuing WIPs, and I don't have enough time to work on them all as it is, so I left this one short. :)


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