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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
I LOVE IT AND REALLY HOPE I GET FIRST REVIEW AND NOT MARINA.

Seriously, never comment about my description being superior to yours again. I could never come up with something like The fiery intensity of the suns penetrates the thin veil separating her from sight, and a concerto of lilac and indigo flutter across her vision.

You might not be overly happy with this (if I remember rightly) but you should be. It's completely delightful and light and lovely. Everything I fail at writing, in fact!

ILY

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Author's Response: I AM SO SORRY, MARINA GOT IN THERE FIRST, BUT SHE IS A CHEATER :P.

Oh I will. And I will do it constantly. You are FAR superior to me. I had to sit and think about that line and even now it sounds silly and contrived XD. I AM BEING OVERLY WORDY.

You do remember rightly, but I will edit it until I am marginally happy. It's needs to FLOW a lot better. I'm so glad that you liked it though! I shall get round to reading your beautiful fluff asap ^_^.

♥ ♥ ILY TOO ♥ ♥
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