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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Hey! Here from the forums with your requested review. Sorry it's taken me so long; I broke my laptop, and thus had no Internet for awhile. But anyway.

This is so sweet. (: I really enjoyed it. I love romance, and I love Neville/Hannah. (: This is really well-written, and I love the quote that plays into it.

It is a bit cliche, yes, but it's the enjoyable cliche, the one that makes me want to read this over and over, because it's just so cute and awesome. (:

Your writing style is really nice. It flows really well together, and you've captured a (mainly) OC and made her interesting, and seem natural.

The only thing I would say is the phrase "-made them braver when they used to be scared, or bolder when they used to be shy" is a bit... I don't know. It's less elegant, I guess you could say?

I didn't notice any grammar/tense/anything else glaring. (:

I love your description as well. There isn't much of it, being as 500 words isn't a lot to cram a story into, but it added something else to it.

I like your Hannah. The way you've written it, I could hear someone reading it out loud in my head (with a cigarette in hand, but that's totally unrelated. d: ), even if it was 3rd person.

Great job on this. (: If you don't mind, when the novel's up, will you shoot me a PM? I'd really like to read it.

Favorited. (:

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the lovely review! The wait wasn't a bother at all, but it's always nice to hear that you enjoyed the story. I'd be happy to send a PM your way when the novel's up.

Nadhira :)

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