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Review:The Empress says:
Wow, Mel, this is stunning. I've seen it on your page but only just got around to reading it. I'm glad I did, this has to be one of the best stories about Fred and George I've ever seen. The anguish here is so apparent, but not overwhelming to the reader or 'in-your-face'. But it's very real, and easy to relate to. Not that I know what it's like to lose a sibling, and I'd just die if my sister ever died, but in this I could feel my own heart breaking along with George's.

The way he remembers Fred is wonderful. Here it seems like Fred was the perfect one. The one who made all the laughter and every good memory George has is because of him. Which, of course, is true of someone grieving. Fred was a wonderful person, but no one is perfect. I also like the almost anger there at the end, but colored by the awful grief of the brother left behind. It was powerfully written. From the laughter at the beginning, to the screaming and crying to the begging for forgiveness and at last an almost hopeless acceptance.

Just WOW Melanie, I loved it, to say the least. And now that I've rambled on without coherent thought, I'll just leave it at that.

XOXO
Shiloh

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