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Review:Ydnas Odell says:
Wow! Heart felt. I liked this a lot! This sort of fics are so hard to execute well, since there is no new drama, but only past tense drama.

It might have worked even better though if you had just focused on Dennis and maybe on or two of the more obscure characters though; say Lavender and then maybe just Luna because we sort of know about Hermione and Ginny, although Harry's part is essential.

Also, some of the paragraphs need to be broken in two of three to make it easier to read.

A 10, though, absolutely!

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review!! :)

This was actually one of the very first things I had ever written. I am very hesitant to change anything in it. If I would, I would lose this as a bar to compare my new work to. If that makes sense?

I'm glad you enjoyed this!
Melissa


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