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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
THAT PEEVES IS KILLING ME! i wonder what sirius would have said if they hadn't be interrupted! and its obvious James and Sirius were yelling at Remus because they saw him with laura wrapped around him. of course it was just to help her to the hospital wing, but they didnt know that. i think its cute he got that jealous, I love jealousy in a romance haha.

that's so sad that laura thinks she's not good enough for him! sirius obviously was taken aback by it. I think it would be really interesting to see some of these chapters, such as this one, from sirius's point of view!

10/10 lovely job

Author's Response: Hi again!

Yes, there were a few people frustrated with Peeves in this chapter. He definitely interrupted A Moment, as some would say. Sorry about that. :D

And yes, that's precisely what the argument was about. It did look suspicious, especially considering Remus had cleaned the blood from Laura's face so it wasn't obvious she'd been hurt. I'm quite fond of that argument all told, to be honest. :)

As for Sirius' POV, well I have written some scenes from his POV which I'll be loading up as a short story collection once this has all been posted. And I may write more, so I do take requests. I'll admit that this isn't one that I've written but I'll have a think about it and if I get inspired you may well see it.

cheers, Mel


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