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Review:maggie says:
i know you wrote this a while ago, but I'm going to comment anyways. I read this in one sitting, and it COMPLETELY brightened by mood. It was so funny! There was enough steaminess towards the end to make up for a lack thereof in the beginning. The characters were very well portrayed. It was such a creative idea!! I highly enjoyed it.
So now for some criticism, which is minimal. In the beginning of this chapter, the meeting with DUmbledore was too long--i was about ready to skip it all and rush to the part with h&D to see what happened! Excruciating. Also, I do think you should have made it longer. FOr example, delving in to the thought processes and emotions of some of the characters would have made the story a lot better. You also could have had a more coherent order to some of the sections; for example, the beginning to end of an island escapade, instead of starting in the middle, etc. More detail; longer. Thats all. Thank you for writing this story for us all to enjoy =]

Author's Response: So the steaminess was worth the wait, I'm glad to hear. I knew starting off with a bunch of unexpected steaminess would be satisfying, but unlikely.

I'm almost glad it was excruciating - it means the characters and plot were getting to you! Thanks for your comments and reviews. I really appreciate them.

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