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Review:Eridanus says:

First of all, thank you SO much for writing me such a lovely story. When I heard you were planning it I squee'd a ridiculous amount and I'm doing so even more now. And you're the funny one really XD.

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR SECOND PERSON? WELL, I DO, BUT IT'S PROBABLY AN ILLEGAL AMOUNT. And you write the most wonderful Dominique. Combine that with a Dom/Lysander shipping and I am in heaven ♥.

And I am such a total creeper that the mention of Teddy made me adore it even more? There are so many versions of Dominique, but I can more than imagine her crying at the thought of losing her first love. Or who she thought her first love. BUT WHY WOULDN'T TEDDY BE YOUR FIRST LOVE?!

Favourite Part ♥♥♥:

And when he cupped your tear-streaked face in his soft hands and kissed you, it wasn't a romantic moment when you realised you loved him all along-you pushed him off you, your heart racing and your blood pumping in your ears.

It was real, and you couldn't deal with reality so you ran. Because you knew he would chase you.

And don't the names Dominique and Lysander sound so lyrical and perfect together? They're like a fairytale couple and just sound like they should work. AND YOU MAKE THEM WORK.

Everything was described so wonderfully and I would be incredibly jealous if this story wasn't dedicated to me ♥ - BUT IT IS AND I LOVE IT AND YOU.

WAIT. And the night is darkest just before dawn bit? OMG, BEAUTIFUL. And with so much meaning behind it. Just once I realised that she was incredibly upset, but then Lysander said this and kissed her... It was amazing. I think I swooned.

Want to marry this bit too ♥:
you curled up crying over losing a man you know now you never even knew



Author's Response: I can't even begin to respond to this, Jane. It was my pleasure ♥

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