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Review:ChaosxxLovesxxMe says:
:D I know you are already working on the next chapter, which by the way is WONDERFUL, but I think it would be sort of fitting to have Willow as the narrator for the next chapter, since this one kind of is focused on her. I mean at the end anyway.

Just my point of view, but I am no writer my any means. I'm 100% reader. But I do want that next chapter. I never seem to have enough, kind of like ice cream. yum.

10/10

Author's Response: Sorry to say that Willow will not be the narrator for this chapter, but I do like the idea of having her narrate at some point in the story. I actually tried taking up your suggestion and tried writing chapter 21 from her pov but i just couldnt get into her character comfortably enough for me to actually develop on it. so sorry to say that grace is still in the pilot's chair, but hopefully you will be satisfied. and i hope that this chapter lives up to your hopes and expectations; I've been unintentionally cruel by not making the time to continue to write.

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