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Review:TheDirigiblePlum says:
Wow I love your stories. Each one is so unique and different that I feel like separate people write each one! You're so adaptable and versatile and imaginative. Not that I'm jealous or anything... :P

Each word and phrase means something in this, or so I felt anyway! Nothing that's said in this story is wasted, which really intensifies the emotion and increases the sense that you're part of what's going on. Every sentence just works consistantly with each other, so the mood flows all the way through.

Also it's like a "well spoken" story, like in terms of vocabulary and sentence structure, just like Minerva talks normally as she's obviously very clever. Her personality is perfectly done, from how she thinks and feels and why she liked Myrtle in the first place.

I also liked the person (?) it was in, like how it's written as "you think". Is this second person? Sorry I'm not very "person" savvy. :D It gave it a unique edge for me because I've not read many stories like this.

I'll stop writing all this waffle now! I'll just end and say that I loved the whole idea of this story and I've always had a soft spot for Myrtle because it's clear how lonely she is. Which is always sad. :( Oo and her presence in this story was almost ghostly, like she wasn't really there which reflected how insubstantial she felt in real life. :)

I promise I'll stop now! :D Thank you again for a great read!


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