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Review:Laugharama_llama says:
Hey Melissa, it's Katrina with your review from TGS!

UGH!! Although, I usually review every chapter for multi-chapter requests, I was so anxious to know what happened that I told myself that I would skip this chapter and review it along with chapter two! But then I went one chapter ahead, and there wasn't an immediate continuation! GR, MELISSA! Sigh, so I came back to do a proper review, hahaha!

Once again, I applaud your detail! You started the chapter off wonderfully, with showing how nervous Teddy was!! I also enjoyed that minor detail of "NT + RL 4EVER" - it was so cute!! It tied in very well with the chapter too, since he was about to propose and all.

I really liked how you incorporated the memory of when they were kids! It was a cute idea of how to propose and it just made me smile :)

Your ending just about killed me. I don't know WHY, because I knew it was coming, but it still did! :( I guess because the whole story is in a third-person Teddy POV, so I was getting this huge loving vibe and then she said NO! -sniff-

Great job! Next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay Katrina!!!

:) hahaha... I pull a lot of readers' legs with the abrupt jump in time btween the prologue and the first chapter. *evil laugh*

I'm glad that the attention to detail was appreciated. I'm sort of an attention to detail queen. The ending is a bit cruel on my behalf. lol. But she didn't necessarily say 'no,' she just didn't answer at all...

Thanks dearie!
Melissa


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