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Review:laurenb4harryp says:
Maybe just do a POV from an outsider for the next chapter, to make it more interesting; it includes both Oliver and Katie's feelings in the same chapter. I did, however, think that both Oliver and Katie's POV were good, so maybe just continue on in a pattern like that - Oliver, Katie, Outsider - and mix it up if you want to make a big impact for certain parts of the story. That would really make it for me!

Anyway, just thought you'd like to know that this story is extremely good and that the relationship between the two main characters is perfect! I also like the way you space paragraphs - I don't have to screw up my eyes because someone's lines are too close together!! Well done! 10/10

Author's Response: Thats an idea, could be different! I might do that actually, a little mix up could be fun! Thanks so much for your comments, glad you like my Katie and Oliver and I totally know what you mean about spacing, sometimes you get a huuge headache! Thanks for reviewing!

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